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Review for Catharsis Chapter 6 from Popdude125 on November 20, 2010
Very gruesome, sonwhat funny what with the soca and all, well written
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from sqweeka on October 11, 2010
Review for Catharsis Chapter 1 from puffn on June 27, 2010
Hey, In this, it says that Harry is 40 when he goes back. If Harry is 40, and 17 years after the last book, Albus Severus is 11 while Harry is 34. This means that AS became a Dark Lord and Harry had to kill him around the time AS graduates from Hogwarts. (40 years old Chapter 1 paragraph 6) I hope to read and enjoy the rest of the story. Sorry for the nit picking.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 12 from chrisguy9017 on September 25, 2009
Wow I just read the entire story and it was very captivating. Is it posted on FF? I really like how the girl seems to be just a male version of cannon Harry with a touch of femininity. Im definitely gonna continue reading.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 12 from feuerfliege on September 20, 2009
Very interesting story. Can't say I was happy to ready about Harry's 'sister' of all things, but you definitely pulled it off in an interesting way. I enjoyed the story a lot thus far and I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 12 from ParselMaster on September 14, 2009
So book 2 is off to a good start. Even after so long still have recollection of your story and was pleased when it updated. I really want to read what comes next. If there were errors in grammar or spelling they were not jarring enough for me to notice. I don't believe that you had even one real error though. I'm very intrigued in the plot of book two. The way you have this story set up is very unpredictable, but supremely entertaining.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 12 from whatareyouevensaying on September 13, 2009
Excellent update. It's been a while, so it took me some time to remember the particulars of the story, but now that I do, I'm even happier than I was to see an update! You're really taking all of the characters in interesting directions...dunno how you've come up with so much! Looking forward to more.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from Jesp-R on September 12, 2009
Fucking epic! ^^ The battle between Harry and Dumbledore's the most awesome fighting-scene I've ever read. I especially liked the mirror magic and Godrics Challange - never seen such unique magic in HP fanfics, heh. Hope to see the sequel soon. Good job! :)
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from Stygius on May 11, 2009
absolutely brilliant... when is the next installment coming... really looking forward to where you take this... the siren's did say that with Bianca, Harry could find a way to over come the powers that be. i look forward to see the remaining Book and Arcs... any idea how many and when we can expect them... looking forward to it.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 1 from neopyro on February 24, 2009
Damn it! The first 10k words were awesome... and you had to pull out that crappy "I'm Harry's sibling" junk. They're everywhere, and I cannot escape them!!!
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from ahsun1992 on January 09, 2009
Nice foreshadowing on the rebellion. Would add more but its 3:30am in UK. -standard good job message-
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Yeah, really unexpected ending. I will admit that I like the idea of ending the story in such a place. Good to see a sequel in the works. Sometime. In the Clockface now?
Review for Catharsis Chapter 10 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Finally, a good explanation of Arithmancy! I have NEVER seen a satisfactory explanation as to what Arithmancy is, outside of Japanese Jew's writings. Awesome.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 9 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
I found Voldemort's teachings to be fascinating, especially considering I've seen very few satisfactory explanations into the nature of Horcruxes.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 8 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Spectacular job on Todd. Ultra wacky, but does follow in a logical manner. Nice reveal as to where the blood came from. Interesting was the fact that Dementors have a resemblance to loyalty and gratitude. Nothing I've ever seen before. The whole "dueling with aurors" scene felt very awkward to me. Why would an 11-year old girl be dueling with aurors, regardless of her skill level? Great ending.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 7 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Well done on this chapter. Narcissa teahcing at Hogwarts would be a good idea, but maybe unworkable this late in the summer, so close to term.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 6 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Creative way to get rid of the Dursleys. The Hidden Hand does not screw around. I'm curious as to the ramifications this has with respect to the prophecy. Well done.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 3 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
Fantastic false names Harry gives. Oddly enough, not far-fetched in terms of Wizarding names. The siren's deal was certainly creative, if a bit random. Here's to hoping you delve into their backstory some. Yeah, didn't think Harry should be able to touch the prophecy. Well done on the chapter.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 2 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
I used a similar mechanic to this in one of my TGYH's, seeing as The-Power-He-Knows-Not is a cliche, but you've added a depth to it that still makes it interesting, so well done there. The Hidden Hand is an interesting wrinkle. I wonder if Harry got everything wrong, and he didn't time-travel, but hopped sideways into a parallel world. If he had indeed time-traveled, I would think everything would be the same until the moment when Harry started diverging from the original timeline. Nice, unexpected twist with Sirius beign possessed. Unless I'm mistaken, the Hidden hand might have been Sirius all along. I don't know what conscious Horcrux implied, at least in technical details, but it should be interesting. Well done.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 1 from Voice of the Nephilim on December 26, 2008
I'm glad that someone's finally acknowledged that having such a terrible name would surely drive a boy into darkness. Harry doesn't seem to be leaving anything to chance. While setting the dementors loose upon the remaining Death Eaters was a drastic step, I like that this Harry is absolutely ruthless in his actions. I wonder how much Harry is going to have left to accomplish after this chapter. Three Horcruxes down? I'm fond of the promise of Umbridge being murdered. Bianca? I'm not sure I buy her story. TWO people going back in time? There was also the fact that she referred to Harry as a kid, as though she wasn't seeing through the eyes of a true child. Ah well. A fine beginning.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from Kyle_Dodge1 on December 25, 2008
Wow. Read the whole thing. I fucking loved it. Even with all the cliches. Fanfuckingtastic. Time for bed though. It's three AM Christmas day and I have wrapping to do. I am eager for more.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 11 from whatareyouevensaying on December 21, 2008
Jeez, there's more to Dumbledore than meets the eye...much like Harry and Bianca. Hopefully in the sequel everything gets explained. This chapter was superb, though. I really enjoyed the Mexican standoff that you pulled off, no easy feat in writing. You did a great job showing every character's perspective of that crazy situation. Looking forward to Book 2.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 10 from whatareyouevensaying on December 21, 2008
It's about time SHE can at least start to treat him like a person. It was starting to get a tad frustrating. At any rate, these two updates were both excellent. I'm really intrigued by Voldemort's lessons, but Harry's dysfunctional relationship with the Auror Corps was probably the best part for me. Looking forward to more.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 8 from DaBear on August 22, 2008
OOOOO!!! nice finish, hope to see more soon.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 8 from stealacandy on August 14, 2008
Not bad, for something written just to pass the time... not bad at all!
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