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Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Twocanz on December 03, 2008
It's so funny, I found the link to this story on another site that you're on where people were bashing one of my stories!lol Anyhow, I haven't read this one yet, I've read the reviews (spoliers are my friends!LOL) and I can't wait to read it! I wanted to let you know that I pimped (or rec'd) your story on my livejournal community for Harry/Cho stories (or Charry stories which I thought I came up with, guess not!LOL) so I hope you get even more hits. Here's the link if you want to see other Charries!LOL http://community.livejournal.com/charry_haven/ Twocanz
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from fishbowl on September 18, 2008
Very nice story :) *evil* dark!harry done just the right way and through a non-cliched reason *thumbs-up*.. can't wait for the update!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from inanimatezeus on August 28, 2008
Dark!Harry done right. I look forward to seeing this story fleshed out, especially how Harry breaks Cho to his will. While it has been done before, I don't think I've ever read a story quite as well crafted. That you managed to capture sex in it as well, without making it seem like smut, is a talent that should not be wasted. All too often a story like this comes around where the sex becomes the center of the storyline, so it's refreshing to see it as an element of a bigger picture. Excellent work, indeed!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from hydrocortisone on August 13, 2008
Great story so far! Keep it up!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from goddessa39 on August 09, 2008
Man, and I was just getting into it. Im not much for H/Cho but the whol sort of 'Insane' pair sounds grand.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Vash on August 07, 2008
HOLY SHIT! IM REVIEWING! D: Anyway... You know I love this chapter. The inspirations for their insanity and darker mindsets were brilliant. The Dementor thing was a lot more original that I would have come up with, and pretty damned good, actually. I agree, though, that ALLCAPS!Harry sucks. :/ And Poor Loli Chang. But if it is the dear girls suffering that has led to the previous chapter, then her sacrifice is a noble one. Bless you Loli Chang.
Author reply
Holy shit, you're reviewing!! Well you know where the credit lays. ;p Sigh... I loved ALLCAPS!Harry from OotP. But perhaps it doesn't play as well on the computer. I'll have to change it to ALL"!"!Harry instead. Maybe I could change littesisterChang to Loli... that's a nice name.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from cjonbloodletter on August 07, 2008
Yellow fever, WOOT! Nice fic so far, has good dark overtones. Don't have to much else to say as there isn't to much to comment on yet. I eagerly await your next installment
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Scott on August 06, 2008
Oh I can not wait for more of this.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Scott on August 06, 2008
Loved it so far.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Sesc on August 06, 2008
Just a short note, cause Im seriously writing this with a controler on a PS3, at friends, halfway @ holiday. See what I do, just for you? Needless to say that this chapter with the Dementor reverse thing alone has more originality than all the new stories at ff.net put together. Outstandig idea to get him into the right mindet, Heather. Keep it up :)
Author reply
You are the shit, Sesc. Thank you for your kind compliment. Now I just have to keep doing that ... crap. >_<
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Memory King on August 06, 2008
Extremely well done, especially liked how Harry is setting himself up as the brain in the operation. Can't wait to read more!
Author reply
It's Harry he has to be the brains! Thanks!!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from KtheGreat on August 06, 2008
Great chapter, especially the scene with Cho under the bed. That was really well done. The only thing I didn't like about the chapter was Harry's angry yelling at Ron and Hermione. Nothing really wrong with it, but I'd change it from all caps and just keep the exclamation points. Also very interesting idea with the dementor spewing his lunch in Harry's mouth.
Author reply
Thank you K, Aparently people don't like ALLCAPS!Harry from OotP. :( It brought a bit of good times back fro me.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Jeram on August 06, 2008
Well, this was pretty decent. The Kill Bill allusions were certainly quite apparent. But one thing confused me... they were looking for an "item", and that it was "let's see if anything's here worth your time" - a bit inconsistent. That, and the capital letter yelling is just annoying - that's not writing, that's a telegram. Other than that, and the silly Dementor swallowing, I like it.
Author reply
Thank you for pointing out the "item". I should go back and make it more obvious that Chang got the "item" so it was never there. The capital letters are ALLCAPS!Harry as featured in OotP. That was one of the things I stole from the book. SILLY Dementor swallowing!!! SILLY??? XD
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from Glrasshopper on August 06, 2008
Well this is shaping up to be one insane, twisted, gory story. Now I work closely with the Mental Health department at the hospital I work at so tell me; do you think I need to seek help if I think it's good so far?
Author reply
Yes, this is only the begining of the twisty and gory portions. My goal here is to do things I've never seen done before. I think the real question here is whether or not people are going to want me to visit one of those places after coming up with the bits of gorefest that will litter the story. Maybe you an just check out a book or two to ease your mental health. ;p Thanks!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from whatareyouevensaying on August 05, 2008
"As luck would have it, a seven year old girl was no match for the strength of a fully grown man." That made me laugh a bit. Couldn't help it, in spite of the dark tone of the story. I really enjoyed this update, since it contained perhaps the best justification of Harry turning Dark that I've ever read. Hell of an idea. Looking forward to more.
Author reply
I guess that line can be read a couple of different ways, lol. Thank the boys at DLPirc for helping me with that idea. Moar soon!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from sushiz on August 05, 2008
Great story, cant wait for more update soon!!
Author reply
Thanks, moar to come!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from PapaMidNite on August 05, 2008
I love it, a good explanation for the insanity. I can't wait to read more of this.
Author reply
Thank you. The boys at DLPirc helped a lot in figuring out something that was realistic and hadn't been done before with Harry. I think it was an original idea.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 2 from wolff on August 05, 2008
Yeah, that'd do for the insanity part. Boy, you weren't kidding when you said that "there'd be moar soon", were you? Nicely done. I look forward to seeing the rest of this tale. -W
Author reply
More insanity to come. I'm finishing Usher this week and then you'll see a more constant devotion to this story. Thanks!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Sesc on August 04, 2008
Fuck yeah. That's it, that's it indeed, Heather baby. You write more of that, and I'll give you ... err, what would you want? Say if you ever need an alibi, give me a shout? Anything else? Just make sure you write more of that. Even though, by all rights I should be angry. It's much too similar to a Harry/Bella sequence I had in mind for BTLCL. Now I'll have to rewrite it, otherwise it'll just look like a cheap rip-off ... but oh well. At least I'll have a double fun, writing it for my story, and reading it in yours. Ah, there's nothing quite like a little bit of psycho, some violence and sex, is there? Wise man was wise: Sanity is severely overrated.
Author reply
At the moment, I'm about 4000 words into chapter 2 which will show how Harry and Cho started their little adventure into Psycho land. So yes there will be more. Go ahead and write your scene. I'll be there to tell the naysayers that great minds think alike.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Havoc on August 04, 2008
I gotta say, that was sexy.
Author reply
More sexiness to come!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Memory King on August 03, 2008
That was nothing but impressive! Can't wait to see more of this stuff, I'm also interested in seeing what caused this change. Keep writing!
Author reply
The cause of Harry and Cho's walk on the wild side will be in the next chapter. Thanks!!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Zeelthor on August 03, 2008
Sick as hell.. But damn it was good. xD
Author reply
SIck ... bah, that wasn't sick ... but I can do sick. Heh. In fact I think I will do sick. Thanks!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Lord Ravenclaw on August 03, 2008
Dark, bloody, erotic, and violent. Have to love it. I think PsyCho beats Dickgirl!Cho by a large margin. Even better than romance Cho. Good work, Heather. Look forward to more PsyCho when the fancy next strikes you. =D
Author reply
PsyCho will break the mold of the Dickgirl every has come to know and ... erm, love? Romance will be included, but it's going to be a very demented kind of romance. And you'll have to excuse me, I have to go torture Cho a little more ... just a little more. Have to make sure she's good and insane before she meets up with Harry.
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from wolff on August 03, 2008
Would definately like to see more of this... it's certainly atypical, and that helps it to be fresh and interesting. Of course, the fact that it's dark and erotic doesn't hurt a thing. -W
Author reply
Well that's exactly what I was shooting for. It's hard to be original in the Potterverse, and while we are stealing the idea from somewhere else, I think that is is original to the universe. Moar soon!
Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from Jeram on August 02, 2008
Hmm... I can see why Vash would like this sort of thing. I guess I'm more interested in the backstory than this particular chapter, though. So be sure it's coming.
Author reply
Backstory will be in the next chapter. Violent and reality bending in store for Harry and Cho.
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