Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from mistofshadows on November 04, 2009

So when you going to update? Cause this has to be one of the more interesting stories I've read in a while. It has that interesting grown up twist for the world. Marauder style maps on a grand scale, objects that hide themselves. Things that actually make sense in the ministry. Go figure... But please update.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from Jerrac on July 23, 2009

Interesting. I'm happy to see a time travel fic take advantage of what DH revealed. You've done a good job characterizing the elder Dumbledore's. What exactly is the reason that Percival took Harry to work with him? That seems a little strange. And I was under the impression that he was going to Olivanders after talking to that judge guy. Hope you continue this story soon. :D

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from Inziladun on April 12, 2009

This last chapter was weird, but I'm interested, so I'll wait to read more.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from Quontir on March 19, 2009

Time travel back quite a long way and an interesting cast.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from sanystyle on March 19, 2009

This story is fantastic! There is so few stories where Harry goes back in time to Dumbledore's childhood and this story has many different details. Personally, I like Military of Magic, I have never read about something similar. And of course, Harry is never just plain Harry, there is always something different about him. Really great story. Please hurry with update!

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from farvista on March 01, 2009

Nice to find a new premise. It'll be interesting watching Harry interact with an Albus that isn't really "Dumbledore" at all and seeing how Harry's presence might influence him. The initial setup has certainly gotten my interest. Looking forward to updates. (Okay... I have to say it. Grammar! Spelling! Logic! Oh my! And it's so nice to see a fic that doesn't revolve around 'ships-ships-ships".)

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from The Duke on February 17, 2009

Cool story, Im looking forward to the next chapter.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from Jeram on February 16, 2009

SECOND! (Haven't read it yet - I'll give it full review elsewhere)

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 3 from whatareyouevensaying on February 16, 2009

Very good update. I'm glad that Harry isn't having too easy of a time adjusting. Looking forward to more.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from DaBear on August 21, 2008

This is a VERY promising story, I am quite eager to see more.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Ciroth on June 29, 2008

Interesting start. Wonder how things will go. Defeat Moldy by helping Albus become a better man and thus prevent him from becoming?

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from sinistermeds on April 25, 2008

hey...great story! i hope you update it soon.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from advent on April 13, 2008

I've been waiting for this story since DH and I must say sir/ma'am you do not disappoint. Thanks for the fabulous read and can't wait until the next update!

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from whatareyouevensaying on March 21, 2008

Very interesting start you have here, along with a unique pairing. I hope to see more soon.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 1 from flower248 on February 28, 2008

This is a facinating story. Please update it soon.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from steele55 on February 20, 2008

This is the only story of it's genere its a bit too soon to judge, but so far so good. I like your other work, with the exception of Demon's Feign, Merlin's Pain. It just doesn't click with me its because i haven't read the books or seen the tv show. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to how you progress this story.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Voice of the Nephilim on February 17, 2008

The direction this story has taken was truly a fantastic idea. You explained Ariana's being completely functional in this time line quite well. It makes sense, falling in line quite nicely with what we knew from canon regarding Ariana's attack. A few things I'm curious about: Did Dumbledore mean to send Harry this far back? Will Voldemort be the main antagonist in this story? I eagerly await chapter 3.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 1 from Voice of the Nephilim on February 17, 2008

A very nice beginning you have here for yourself. I really like the idea of, in the case of Harry losing, a future where the wizarding populace looks to Voldemort for protection. The other future was also well-imagined, with advanced spells against mechanized warfare. Great work.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from SlytherinSupreme on January 25, 2008

really good i love it.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Zhong on January 24, 2008

Hoho! A twist I was not expecting. However, this fic will go on for years if you intend to have Harry stop both wars – although I suppose you could use timeskips, but, that would be a fairly large distance to skip; it would disconnect a reader quite easily. You may have taken more than you can chew.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Testament on January 24, 2008

Excellent start to what is promising to be an excellent and original story. I'm looking forward to seeing the interactions between Harry, Albus and Grindelwald. Not to mention Harry/Ariana when it gets to it =P I just hope Harry will have the balls to do what is needed without going teary-eyed and angsty when it comes to dealing with the muggles.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Alssn on January 24, 2008

Well, you've got me intrigued here. Not that much with exact time frame in which Harry was sent, but with sheer potential of Harry/Dumbledore/Grindelwald interactions. Can't wait to see where is this going.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Banner on January 23, 2008

* reeling in surprise * OK, THAT was completely unexpected. I'm going to have to think about this.

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Shade101 on January 23, 2008

Loved the chapter, I've been waiting for a story with Ariana for a while now and was more then pleased to see this. The Death vs. Harry was a nice addition; too many fictions you see all these gods and whatever the hell else supporting Harry. To see him as being just normal in the "death wants j00!" was brilliant. Though concerned about the age of Ariana as you're planning on pairing her with Harry, the age differences does allow for a larger amount of time for them to become closer and for a meaningful character development rather than a sudden "monsterz in myz chest!!!!". Great chapter, can't wait for an update!

Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Dark Stallion on January 23, 2008

Nice to see a somewhat original storyline for a change, keep up the good work; looking forward to the next update.