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Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 2 from Jeram on January 22, 2008
Well, sir, you've done it again. A fantastic chapter from a semi-fantastic author. The journey through Harry's near-Death experiences was a fascinating idea, but I thought it also seemed a bit abrupt at times, ending a tad too quickly. The characterizations are interesting, although I wonder how you'll address semantic differences in speech patterns between the somewhat disparate eras. Percival seems a bit one-dimensional so far, but that should be okay for now. I liked a few of the other touches you threw in here and there. 5/5
Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 1 from Imperator Pesmerga on January 22, 2008
Very cool story. Hope you update.
Review for In the Clockface, Weighted and Weary Chapter 1 from JVTazz on January 08, 2008
I love how this starts out. I most definately want to see more :)
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