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Review for Harry Potter And The Declaration Of War Chapter 1 from dennisud on May 13, 2009
Well I see a dark Harry and a magical world who are gonna think Voldy farts was a nun! Hope he doesn't off any of his true friends, but hey its your story. Just hope harmione and Luna suvive! dennisud
Review for Harry Potter And The Declaration Of War Chapter 1 from Lophaetus Occipitalis on May 13, 2009
It could use some elaboration on where the wandless magic came from, and whether or not it was Voldemort's horocrux Harry came in contact with or if Harry went through some process that Voldemort went through as a teenager as well.
Review for Harry Potter And The Declaration Of War Chapter 1 from bjon66 on May 13, 2009
Not a bad start.. You need a beta though.. Spelling and grammar needs work.. Would like to see more...
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